2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。

The strong will is a valuable virtue and that should be treasure,as an old saying goes:nothing succeeds without a strong will,what this is that strong will resumble good physical,if we want to succeed,we must possess it. The fact is that,the strong will is an important guarantee for success,because it requires you to do everything by all always. In the past,the success all possess the strong will,so i can believe that it is necessary to keep the kind of good quality. As a studant ,If you not to study hard,you will became a useless people in the future. so in my opinion, I think we should have a strong will ,because that can ears us respect of others,and thus promote our study,career or the others aspect of life.