作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。
Because of the international ecomnomic and the crash from modern intelligence,people now pay more attention to English study than Chinese study.According to this,people expecially students can not spell the right words in progresses and sometimes there will be some wrong grammas in their words.Without a good study of Chinese,we can not read a beautiful poet,or use highest words to express our thoughts.And most of all,our culture can not be developed and continued. To protect our culture from facing such a terrible issue,we call for collaborative efforts between schools and students. On the part of schools,courses of tradition should be added to the curriculum.Besides,there should be some group to give students a place to communicate with each other about cultures.On the students' part,they should try to read more books intruducing our culture.Besides,students can make friends with forieng countries to realize the difference between culture and culture.