2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强；连词使用偏少。

With the rapid development of the society, the computer has been playing a more and more importent role in our life. Therefore, there are various opinions among deferent people. Some tend to hold the idea that human being enlarge the knowlege through the computer ,communcating with others conviniently,however, others might contend that the computer makes people lazier and offfers more accesses to crime . From the point of my view, we should take the advantage of the computer invented to help us. Of course , we ought not to spend too much time on the computer.