回复:Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事,不能前往,表示歉意。
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DearWangli I am so haapy to recive your invitation but I am also so sorry that I can not take part to your son' one year old birthday which will hold on at seven o' clock June 10 in the emperor hotel .The reason that I can not join with you is because I need to back home to deal with some business works in these days.I feel really sorry .By he way, congratulations on your son's first birthday and have a nice day. John Smith