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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17591
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Some people believe that each judgments should be after a long time thinking, otherwise, it is ridiculous or untrusted. However, in many times, we do not have enough time to care every situation before we make a judgments, which, may be called, making a snap judgments. These judgments, in many cases, are useful and corrected, even though they may be decided in one second. In other words, snap judgments could be trusted. First of all, a experience leader could make judgments, based on the former experience, without a long thinking. That is the power of memory. For a successful people have experienced many different accidents or situations. They know what should do or what should not do in this time, which means that they could save much time on care each outcomes of any judgments before they choose the best one in this time. It may seemed a snap judgments, in some new man. They may wander, question, and not trusted. But they will be proved that it is the best choice. Second, there is not a judgment that is totally wrong, which, on the other hand, every judgments have its own reason. Like we would never decided to stop school or to close hospital. As a result, some people may take a judgments that seemed without deep thinking, but we can analysed it and study some good points on it, after it, though we may not agree it, we would not say that it is never be trusted. On the last. many stories have proved that making a judgments is always better than do nothing. There is an old sentence: Rather regretting never do, than regretting have done. We need decision and choices when we do not know what to do next, especially, we only have a few moments. In that case, a long time meeting or caring before a judgments is looked ridiculous. It likes that when you meet a people who is too hungry to die, what you should do is just give him or her a cup of rice, without asking him or her what he or she like. In a conclusion, we should trust the judgments even it is snap. There is many different situation that people make snap judgments. Sometimes, we could believe it, sometimes, we could analyze it, and sometimes, we have to trusted it. Though making a judgments with a long time caring is also a good choice, we should not say that snap judgments can never be trusted.

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