题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
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Nowadays,when it come to trust someboby or something,many people just only express that is impossible.With the development of econnomy,computer,telephone,QQ online are important in our daily life. On the country ,we are lack of face to face coummunication .Thus,we don't enough acquire others.But,in fact,in our daily life,we need to trust others. It is saying,you must trust someboby before others trust you. Now,we talk about how to keep maitaining trust.First of all,you are willing to help others eo do something which need nothing reward when others are caught by difficut or trubles.Besides, you are able to learn to bileve others .Do not adubt others whatever sisuation is hard. Please remember 'Believe better than adubt'.Last but not least,in our daily life,we shuld get good manners or habbits which others think we are worthy of trust.For example,when you do something with work-heart ,responsbility,ambition,confidence and other good ability. We all known ,trust is neccesay in our socity,so, we should build the trust in our mind.As University students,we should be example of turst.