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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6317
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;文章丰富的词汇表达请发扬,但词汇拼写要再接再厉。

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Nowadays,when it come to trust someboby or something,many people just only express that is impossible.With the development of econnomy,computer,telephone,QQ online are important in our daily life. On the country ,we are lack of face to face coummunication .Thus,we don't enough acquire others.But,in fact,in our daily life,we need to trust others. It is saying,you must trust someboby before others trust you. Now,we talk about how to keep maitaining trust.First of all,you are willing to help others eo do something which need nothing reward when others are caught by difficut or trubles.Besides, you are able to learn to bileve others .Do not adubt others whatever sisuation is hard. Please remember 'Believe better than adubt'.Last but not least,in our daily life,we shuld get good manners or habbits which others think we are worthy of trust.For example,when you do something with work-heart ,responsbility,ambition,confidence and other good ability. We all known ,trust is neccesay in our socity,so, we should build the trust in our mind.As University students,we should be example of turst.

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