题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays,when it comes to trust somebody or trust in something,many people just only express that is impossible.With the development of economy,computer,telephone,QQ online are important in our daily life. On the contrary ,we are lack of face to face communication .Thus,we don't enough acquire others. nonetheless,in fact,in our daily life,we need to trust others. It is saying,you must trust somebody before others trust you. Now,we talk about how to keep maintaining trust.First of all,you are willing to help others eo do something which need nothing reward when others are caught by difficult or troubles.Besides, you are able to learn to bileve others .Do not adult others whatever sisuation is hard. Please remember 'Believe superior to adult'.Last but not least,in our daily life,we should get good manners or habits which others think we are worthy of trust.For example,when you do something with work-heart ,responsibility,ambition,confidence and other good ability. We all known ,trust is essential in our socity,so, we should build the trust in our mind.As University students,we should be example of trust.