2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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nowadays there are so many topic between computer and human.as we all know,with the development of our science and techonical,so many things around our life have been changed.such as ,before we uaually went to shop to buy clother and food ,but now we are through computer,just need click one second and then just need stay in our home to wait the thing we bought,by the way ,it is really convient.