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2006年专八英语作文真题:Ambition

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:01浏览次数:3441
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题目 Ambition
说明 Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer, once said, "We decide what is important and what is trivial in life we decide that what makes us significant is either what we do or what we refuse to do but no matter how indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these choices and decisions are ours to make. We decide. We choose. And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about do you agree or disagree with him?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
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文中用词稍显贫乏;上下文衔接手法不熟练,没有能够有效的使用衔接词;能适当使用从句,但不够熟练;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。

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ambition make our stronger. when some serious problem come to our life and work, we have to figure out how to best remove it from our circle which we lived all the time. for work, we will make no any progress and fall behind others without any strict target. for life,

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