2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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As we all know,maintaining trust with our faimilies、friends and classmates is perrty important.If we can have trust from the people around us,we can enjoy our life easily. However,it isn't so simple as we said to betrust by others.We have to do what we have no time to do sometimes,because of the promesion we have made to someone.Even we can have more reasonable words to give up what we have to do,but we can't,so that we may earn trust.