广东汕头市2013届高三上学期期末试卷英语作文

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Last weeken，I interview psychoiogy profess Kelly Lam about the spare-feel of Chinese students'opinion.And the result as follow,more than 30 present student aren't willing to spare with other although they are happy or upset.Our education donsen't make student kown the importance of sparing.Expert thinks that learn to spare our feeling is necessary in this life which we live in now.Students shouldi learn how to spare their feeling because it is benefit for the further of growing .