题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On Maintain Trust As we all know that the maintain trust is a very important interpersonal relationship, and it's difficult to build trust.So, today we will discuss about how to build a trust. First of all ,as I think the most important thing is to believe other.If only believe each other and don't suspect others by no reasons that we could build trust among the people.second, being a person that can be believed by others.If a person who always lay to others that he/she won't be believed by others.For third, believe others bravely. We shouldn't just believe others when we think they are worth to believe.we should believe the humanity was kindness,and the most of person are worth believing. If we have done all of these,Iit will be easy to build trust among the person.