小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend's name is Sunjia. English name is Lily. we were often doing things togerhter such as eatting , shopping, reading, and so on . We were tolk about ourselves' emotion and we have encourage each other. new her father is sicking, so i can give her encourage for overcoming difficulties.