2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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As we all know,online shopping is a kind of fashion.We have learnt there are numbers of online address about shoping,for instance,TaoBao,FanKe,,,and so on.The computer has increasingly development with economic increase.so,there are many people stare to use computer,it can spur on online shopping. For on online shopping,i think exsit good and bad side. One side,modern people are so busy,on online shopping enable save their times,it can help them to do more things.Anther side,for some people,they can't believe on online shopping,and think that online exsit a lot of fade goods. In my point of view,we don't think we can often on online shopping.Maybe,we can choose llitle and cheap goods,because it can decrease our risk.