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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:2010
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
评语:

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

the traveling phenomenon The last decade has witnessed the following phenomenon,more and more people choose to travel outside in their spare time,we can clearly see that the numbers are going straight up which become a hot discussion. From my personal perspective,the reasons why people prefer further places of interests are as follows.On the one hand,traveling is a marvelous way to relax our minds,broad our horizons,as well as building up our bodies.There is no doubt that traveling is a good way to stay away from daily masses and get refreshed.On the other hand,with the roaring development of our society,we,now,can afford to pay the money.What's more,it's a excellent chance to promote our family bonds by traveling with our families. This phenomenon will have an influence on the tourism.The tourism will enjoy a prosperity.

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