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多多加强句法知识；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；文中词汇表达丰富度要提升，可是单词拼写错误稍多。
With the development of society, honest is not importance day to day ,as a guraduate,I understand it very important,because if you are a honest man, you will win reputation to youslfe ,people can realize you are a gentlman, but, In nowday,some people think do honesty things you will hard work ,you do not recive some reward ,you do not worthwhile , you are fool. though I do not recive benefit ,but, I obey my heart ,I feel happiness ,As a university student, I think I am wise , My mind improve ,If my country is not honest, we can belivere nobody , our life is darkness . As a honest man,very very required
