文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
In recent time,I found that many students lose their heart to study English though it was very important.So there are some ways to help the people who want to improve English. At the first of all,you must listen English everyday because it can improve your pronunciation.Second,you can read English books or newspaper in your spare time and you will like English in the near future.Third,why don't you speak with your friends? it also can improve your English I think. In a word,I hope you can learn English well!