高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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Playing football is my favorite sport.When I was young,I picked up a football in my way to home by chance . I piayed football with my friends,and then I was fall in love with soccer. I usully train soccer and match with friends after class.We get much happiness on the soccer.My favorite football star is David Beckham.My dream is becoming a professional football player as well as David Beckham．I think if I practice football hard,I will realize my dream someday.