湖南衡阳市八中2013届高三5月月考试卷英语作文

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Online shopping has become fashion.With the development of society,customer prefers to find some different way to buy something which they need.The computer dosen't be wild used until the improvement of technology. It is very convenient for people when they are in online shopping.For eaxmple,customer can seek for something what they want instead of going to the supermakt or other store.There are many kinds for people to select .people can consult the old customer who often consum in the interner.But anyting also have some bad aspect.On the one hand,some online store probaly cheat customer to buy their poor quaility consum.On the other hand,online shopping make more and more ppeople lack of communication with other and be addicted to online shopping,which is do harm to persons' health. In my opinion,people should go outside to buy something,by the way,they also can communicate wiith each other.The most important thing is that person should appropciatly use computer.