作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
My friend's name is Wanghong. English name is Lily. We were recognized in the present company .She is very nice. We were doing something such as eating, shopping, reading together frequently . We were talk about our thoughts and encourage each other . Now her father is sick ,so I can encourage her to overcome the diffculties.