高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

简单句偏多了；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；作者词汇量偏少，还要加强单词拼写的检查；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

my hometown in the ago ,my hometown have many gree trees .in the river have small fishes play .the house is very smpliy .there are popel very happyly . now,there are building high and bueaty houes. the road have cycle and car ,bus .the agriculture environment very badly .the trees derease and the fishes rover. we are must protect environment .let us actiong .