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Central goverment Boardcasting Group now call on a program,which they hope that the public could learn LeiFeng spirit like what the previous generation did.CCTV hostess said that LeiFeng spirit guide people to do right things ,teach youth to have correct outlook.It can also improve modern people's mental health The news has caused many debates.Radical group strongly agree with the statement of official press.They hold that recent economic policy certainly make national economy improved dramaticaly,but not a few people lost their personal value.Society credit has been greatly damaged,they hope that the LeiFeng spirit could make something account Another critics put forward their oppsite viewpoints.They believe that society just need some time to adapt the period of reform.For the most part,our recent society still walk toward postive.The nation is not suffering from the reform.In contrast people gain a lot of oppotunities from the reform,so we needn't learn the spirit of LeiFeng
