2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

With the rapid development of economic,more and more people pay attention to pack of goods.Therefore ,this phenomenon has brought into people's concern. There are many reason responsibible for this phenomenon. for one thing,some people think if the packing is perfct,it mean you have a high status and the quality of goods are amazing.because packing is associated with quality ang status.for another, one of essentical vie is most retails can benefit from exceesive packing .Moreover,they can reap more profit from consumers. In my opinion, i think exceesive packing is a waste resouce. When we consider doing something ,we should in accordiance with environment,because packing is not decay easily,it causes pollution.