2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Nowadays,many of us had the parents love,they had all of their hope on ours.At the same time,they always agree ours go to buy the things our like or love,in one hand they will remember give our pin money.on the anther hand they willing to hear our complain in our life.but it has something matter in our mind.It will make our mistake our parents mean,we always think that is natural about parent love ours.If they love me,they should give me the best I want .In fact,it is a mistake of us , we should save our pin money ,And reduce parents bear in family economy . Now,i am a sophomore,i understand that parents for me do not be laugh by schoolmates,they work in construction site all the day .It just make me have some beautiful clothes or buy something i like.I can remember when i was a high school student,i was a bad girl,i always do what i want to do ,and spending much pin money.But my good parent did not told me off . After one years my mother had a bad stomachache,it just because she work hard and often forget to eat food .when i saw her pale face,i know that i must be grow up and take care my parents because they need my help .I am the hope of my parents,so I can not make my parents disappointed.what is more i awake up from my naive or bad dream. May be you are a lucky dog,because your parent have a good job and you do not like me .But if you always like a naught child ,when you parents old or they could not to work,who will make a better life for them,who will take good care them who will give a comfort house them.If you are a good person ,please don not hesitate to grow up .Come back from your miss youth.