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University as I can see Ladies and gentlemen, I feel honored to address a speech here,now let me share my opinion on college life. University as I can see is an epitome of the realistic society,where we can meet a variety of people who come from around our country or maybe foreigners.You can also get some chances to do some work that make you get some experience which is benefit your job in the future.However,at the same time ,universities are not always so good,there are still some problems. At the first,you must believe that the life in the university is exciting and colorful.As for me,in the high school,teachers always told us that when you get into the college,you must be relaxed.But now what I want to say is that universities are also fulled with competitions.There you must learn to communicate with various people.You also need to take part in more activities as much as possible so as to expand your friend circle and display yourself. Besides,universities are also encouraging students to spend some of your spare time to manage the school,such as hold activities.In the university,you can attend various organizations and associations like student union,where you can get work experience and improve yourself.You must get on well with your partners and strengthen your ability of team work.You need to exchange your ideas to your parters,You should try to communicate with them.And then you may be the best friends.You can share everything with your friends and help each other both in study and daily life. In order to make more friends ,firstly,you must be getting on well with your roommates ,just because no matter what will happen in the future,you will be with them for four years or even longer.You are closed sisters or brothers.You get everything together.In a word,you roommates are your relatives.Just as the saying goes that,The friendship in university is forever.So all of us should value it. However,it’s obvious that university life have some problems.You maybe confused with the strange life when you firstly arrive there.You may be difficult to adapt it.You may can’t stand the behaviour of your roommates because of the differences of the culture.You may miss your family as it’s the first time that you are far from home.And you don’t know how and what to do.All of these will make you afraid of the university,even hate.But on the other hand,the difficulties make us independent and know how to take responsibilities and play a social role appropriately. University is a challenge for me like many students .University life is much more different from the high school.In the university,you can get more time to do something you like but never had time to do before.Whether your college life is great or not depends on how to dominate it.Some students feel the life in university is negative.They don’t want to study and read.They only play games day by day.When they graduate and find that they can do nothing.They may be sorry but at that time everything is too late.Competitions exist everywhere,I must cherish the time,try my best to adapt the university life.Although sometimes I’m also worried about my future and my courses that I choose to major in,I think I’ll never give up.Life with pressure makes our life significant and adapt the real society as soon as possible. The lessons in the university are fewer compared with yours in the high school.You should take more time study by yourself.You also need to take notes as you did before because almost all the teachers are willing to choose media to teach.You should spend your own time appropriately.Universities life is the independent life,all the things depend on yourself. As you can see,university is a new start,we should say goodbye to the old things and look forward to the future.I believe that everyone in the university can have an unforgettable memory and a happy new life.
