2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；有效的运用了一些复杂句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。

　　The right to pursue happiness is issued to us all, but people in the East and West have different notions of happiness. Compered with people in the West, people in the East pay more attention to their family and children. So they usually think that happiness is enjoy life with family and friends, they willing to work hard for this goal. Under the influence of traditional culture, people believe that simple is happiness, especially in China. However, people in the West prefer power to simple life, they would like to own power to control others and nature. it’s common for people to live a free life. In short, they consider that freedom and power are the basis for happiness. Whether it is positive or negative, one thing is certain that each notion contact with their economic development and cultural awareness.