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可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
In recent years, the topic that parents have arranged everything with their child has increasing widely public concerns, which is becoming more and more popular. A large number of parents arrange their child's life by so many ways. As for me, I don't think it is a good idea for their child and it will bring a series of problem to them and their child, becoming the one who lack of independence in their future. In other words, they would haven't lived without their parents' helps. In view of the importance and the complexity of this phenomena, it should take some effective measures for it. Above all, it is necessary that improving parents' awareness, and giving more space to their child. What's more, the government also make some steps for improving this situation. In addition, the school should offer some acttivities to the students, making them more and more independent.
