2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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In life, we all have an unspeakable secret, an irreversible regret, an unreachable dream and an unforgettable love. The only thing we can do is try not to regret.In my life,I do a lot of things made me regret.And then I often wodered why am I do that?I often feel very confused.But now,I think I can figure out the reason.I was too wilfulness that it can not successfully achieved to my dream.From now on,I must get rid of these obstacles.