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I have a good friend . We are both fo classmat. In the class , he is a class monitor ,and he exercise is very good , he is a great basketball , so he is a tall boy . Now , he worked ing the Beijing , uausally , we are use the QQ communication ,we are talking everying . Just sample , Exercise , Musical, Movement . Sometimes , I thinking , very lucky to meet my good friend.