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字数:300 满分:100分
作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
There is no doubt that to save money is our traditional virtue. so everyone should carry forward this spirits. It's anyone duty even students . As a student, we should be careful with our money in daily life. Waste is a shame. For one thing, we should not bought somthing that we don't need. For another thing, we ought to focus on something we need on sale, which will help us save some money. As for me, i often bought goods on sale and its not to expensive. Forthemore, i also never bought goods i don't need.Because i think that's our responsibility to save it. And we ought to known earn money is very dificulty for our parents. We only a consumers,and we can make money for ourselves. In a word, we will honer that we did.To save money is a smart consumer, not foolfish.