2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

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Free admission to museum Nowadays,more and more museums are opening for free,which provides people a chance to boarden their horizon and learn more about history.As not everyone can afford the museum ticket fee or has interested in old days,government dicided to stop charging for the admission to museum.And it require more and more museums to open for free,just for increase the attractiveness of our country's history. But,fact of life,free admission to museum result in a large quantity of problems.First of all,more visitors cause the increasing workers and the payment to workers.Moreover more visitors may due to more cleaning work.most importantly,protection must strengthen and the management fee also higer. In my own view,free admissio to museums should be courage,but museums must set up a maximum visitors everyday.And visitors must have a duty of keeping the environment from being pollution and protecting everythings in the museum.