2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；应增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意部分有错误的句子。

In recent years ,the technology of computer is getting more and more higher ,it take a lot of convenience to human being . Computer is our most familiar friend in technology home. By using computer we can learn at home that can save much time for us could do other things .also ,we can search papers in the internet that teachers tell us to .The most important benefits that computer take for us is that it is a tool for our life. At the same time computer take benefits it also bring a variety of harms for the young .As their brain are not grown rape ,they can not resist the temptation that coming out suddenly to them when they search the internet .There are many youth are addicted to the internet game that may delay their academic career. In the future computer will become our friend for many years,only in the way that we use it in a right way can we make great progress.