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作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用学术词汇;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
It is very common that more and more graduates get married after their college life . That may be the ones which has been falling in love with his girl or her boy for a long time through their whole period of college .When it comes to sum up causes of the foregoing situation ,people may picture some as follows . Firstly ,someone thing in it that the more looser institution of legislation in school ,the more boost in the number of wedding of students .They convince that if the school attach more attention on the happening,we can not haven t seen so much reports about it .Secondly ,some psychologists point it out that the social reason like more and more democratic thought about wedding in a rather young age ,this view means that the foregoing student can go for it with no consideration about rights and allowance . In my opinion ,i must give my vote to the rational and scientific thought that we can not do it since as a student or a graduate student we have a little experience of working and no economic income.The love is not the whole life ,as the saying goes, we have to face the real life after the romantic and sweet perspective ,as to it ,some fundamental issues like dwelling and giving birth to a baby or other grown-up problems ,in a world ,we just a children definitely.