2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

We will make many friends in our life,for example,we discuss with people face to face or by telephone or even on the internet.It is really important for us to maintain good relations with our friends. In daily life,people often seem to keep touch with others on the internet.Because it is known that chatting on the internet is a fast and relaxing way.People will talk to strangers with their true emotion.Maybe they could cry or smile if they want, strangers would not know who they are.People feel good on that way. However,in reality,people seem to spend so much time on the internet.It does not help.We need interpersonal communication and we need to design our time before.