拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
We will make many friends,for example,we discuss with people face to face or by telephone or even on the internet.It is really crucial for us to maintain good relations in our life. In daily life,people often seem to keep touch with others on the internet.Because it is known that internet is a fast and relaxing way.People will talk to strangers with their true emotion.Maybe they could cry or smile if they want, strangers would not know who they are.People feel good on that way. However,in reality,people seem to spend so much time on the internet.It does not help.We need interpersonal communication and we need to design our time before.In my opinion,we do not only change the attitude much on the internet,but also step into the society to communicate at the same time.
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