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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4563
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

用户练习作文:

We will make many friends,for example,we discuss with people face to face or by telephone or even on the internet.It is really crucial for us to maintain good relations. In daily life,people often seem to keep touch with others on the internet.Because it is known that internet is a fast and relaxing way.People will talk to strangers when having their own mood.Maybe they could cry or smile if they want, strangers would not know who they are.People will feel good at last. However,in reality,people seem to spend so much time on the internet.It does not help.We need interpersonal communication and we need to design our time before.In my opinion,we do not only change the attitude much on the internet,but also step into the society to communicate at the same time.

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