文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文章层次较为清晰;复杂句的使用不是很丰富;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Dear Mr.Johnson, We had gotten the 3,000 products of your firm on December 22th.However,the number of products should be 3,500 according to our signing of the No.35 order,so we still have not received the rest of 500.Please check your product list and we look forward to your early reply. Wang Haiyang December 23rd,2008