2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

过程性词汇偏少；采用了一些简单的从句；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

As we knnow,a strong will is the vital provement of succeed.In order to achieve our goal,without any doubt,we must try our best to attain what we need.In this process,we must have a will of iron. You may not meet your dream with a strong will,but you can't make your dream come true without a strong will.As the saying goes,only those who determind his mind can finish great duty. Everyone must strong their minds before starting each event.Students,of course,must determind their minds during study,particularilly when it come cross difficulities.If you don't work hard,you can not become a person who can contribute to the society.