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2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:33浏览次数:2052
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题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?

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1.对这种做法有人表示支持
2.有人并不赞成
3.我认为…
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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Triumphal Tiger Mother, a book which has captured the best popular book of Amazon's weekly bestsellers for more than 12 weeks, brings out many debates about famous spoon-feed, not only in America but also in China. In Triumphal Tiger Mother, the author sent her 3 daughters to many classes such as piano, ballet, gyms and soccer every day. Some times, she said in her book that she must get up at 5:00 am to drive car with her oldest daughter to another town to have piano class and then back home to send other 2 to learn ballet and then to work. Eventually, 3 of her daughter are all received by Universities of Ivy League with full scholarships. This book inspires American parents about the question whether should they push their kids to hardworking for better performances in school or just let it go to stimulate their innovations by themselves. Out of expectations, most of the criticisms come from the other side of Pacific. Maybe the young people of China have suffered enough from the social evaluation which regards test score as the most important, they are trying to make their voice heard by the American people. "Tiger parents maybe make kids get high scores and have a nice performances in school. But on the other side, as far as we see, this education kills children's imagination and creativity as well." In my opinion, education is always a serious topic whenever we are. Tiger mother and wolf father love their children and that they sending their children to classes are not wrong. So do the other parents. All children love games. Games are their nature. Parents love their children, no matter which way they choose to express their love.

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