2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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In recent years,with the increasing improvment of internet, more and more people become to use computers in our common daily life.It is well-known that computers make the life more convenient and funny.No one can deny the fact that we can not emphasise the importance of computers too much.If computers can think like humanbeings,it may be a good thing.Nevertheless,what a terrible thing that humanbeings think like computers ! Why do i say like that? To begin, people think like computers, which means that we will live a life without innovation.Thus, we will never progress.What's more, people think like computers,which makes the communication without emotion.The humor ,funny and love will gredually disappear. From what has been dicussed above,we can easilly draw a conclucion that computers are significant in our dailly life, however,we cannot think like computers,and we should communicate with each other in realistic life instead of on the internet.