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Dear Mr.Johnson, We had gotten the 3,000 products from your firm on December 22th.But there is a problem.According to our signing of the No.35 order,the number of our products are supposed to be 3,500.However,we still have not received another 500 products.I hope you can check your product list and respond to us as soon as possible.
