作者能较准确地使用学术词汇,不过存在个别拼写错误;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词;请注意分段。
To improve student'smental health is of much importance.the mental health education is the connotation of quality-oriented education.a student who master better psychological quality can adopt the changeable environment quickly.and they can play a major role in their work.thus ,to avoid the mental problem,shool shoud hold various of activities about mental health,for example ,opening course and take an active talk .as for students ,they can communicate with teachers or classmates ,which can relieve ther pressure in the heart.