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文章层次较为清晰；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；文中词汇表达较为灵活，学术词汇需要加强，单词拼写要认真。
If the world only has hunan being without,maybe we is lkely to live in the cold winter without sunny.What a terrible thing.Animals are human beinge'closed friend,in particular,the existence of rare animals makes the whole world more colorful.Because of animals'existence,people can play with them and research the origin of animals,even furthuer'scientific research.So rare animal plays an important part in our life. Recently,I was shocked when I heard that rare animals were harmed by human being althogh they live in zoo.Some people lack of the awareness of protecting animals and don't care about animal,which result in this truth took place. We should remember protect-animal is everyone's duty and learn to pubicize its meaning.It is very important to make measures.But the most important thing is that improve people's awareness to protect rare animals.
