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2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:33浏览次数:1955
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题目 How to improve student's mental health
要求
1.学生心理健康的重要性
2.学校应该怎样做
3.学生自己应该怎样做
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;句式变化多样;文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺,单词拼写也要更仔细;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

it is very important to improve student's mental health ,but how we improve student's m ental health ? at first ,l think the principle should be serious about this matter and take measure to solve problem . secondly , school should afford sone place and it can make student to relieve their's feeling . if we can do it ,the school can improve quality of teaching and the student can become more health ,however ,althought the school take measure is not enough ,the student should be same face their own problems ,on the one hand ,the student should be improve their phochological quality .on the other hand , the student should be get to known theirself and get out of their inferiority complex, in a word ,if we can do it ,i believe that we can get more health than before .

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