2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

As the saying goes,there is a will,there is a way.He,who has a strong will,never gives up,no matter what happens.Poor personality such as laziness and reality limit can always be the barrier to success. As a famous athlete said,gaining success is just like a marathon.The person who keeps to the end will be the winner.So he did.For example,Adisen made experiments on 99 different kinds of materials to find which one is the best for a bulb,but unluckily failed.However, he did not give up and had another try,and finally succeeded.No doubt a strong will plays an important role in success. In the same way,a student also needs a strong will and preserve in hard learning.Forming a strong characterist is far more essential than the theory knowledge. As a word,a strong will maybe can not make sure of your success,but you will not succeed,if there is not a strong will.