2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；作者词汇量比较丰富，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活，但要避免出现拼写错误。

In recent years,with the increasing improvement of the internet, more and more people use computers in our common life.It is well-known that computers make the life more convenient and funny.No one can deny the fact that we cannot emphasise the importance of computers too much.If computers can think like human-beings,it may be a good thing.Nevertheless,what a terrible thing that humanbeings think like computers ! Why do I say like that? To begin, people think like computers, which means that we will live a life without innovation.Thus, we will never progress.What's more, people think like computers,which makes the communication without emotion.The humor ,funny and love will gradually disappear. From what has been discussed above,we can easilly draw a conclucion that computers are significant in our dailly life, however,we cannot think like computers,and we should communicate with each other in realistic life instead of on the internet.