题目要求:
围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。
字数要求:
200字以内
作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
In chinese ancient,people regard honesty as gold.So we can see the fact that honesty is very important for a man.honesty can’t bring us money and power,but it can make me feel happy from heart.Honesty is the basic that we can stay in this society.Now that honesty is so rarity,why so many people do some things without honesty?In our society there are many dishonesty things,which make us angry.Unsafety milk and food,immoral action happens usually in this city.So I feel the honesty is the most important thing more and more. Our society needs honesty,honesty is not only helpful for others,but also helpful fot ourselves.So let us hold the honesty and make our society become an honest city.