2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

As the saying goes,where there is a will,there is a way.He,who has a strong will,never gives up,no matter what happens.Outside and Inside factor such as laziness and can always be the barrier to success. As a famous athlete said,achieving success is just like a marathon.The person who keeps to the end will be the winner.So he did.For example,Adisen made experiments on 99 different kinds of materials to find which one is the best for a bulb,but unluckily failed.However, he did not give up and had another try,and finally succeeded.No doubt a strong will plays an crucial role in success. In the same way,a student also needs a strong will and preserve in hard learning.Forming a strong character is far more essential than the theory knowledge. As a word,a strong will maybe cannot make sure of your success,but you will not succeed,if there is not a strong will.