2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇丰富度和学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，文中有较多拼写错误；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；可适当增加复杂句的使用量；连词使用偏少。

today we will talk about a very hot topic "computer and man".recently,computer become more and more popular,and variable computers has been product:pc,paid,notbook.but is it a good scene ? some people say we can do nothing without computer.the computer is very import.we send e-mails,watching massage on the internet. but there a lot of people think it's is not good for human,expecially teenager. people