2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays us high earnings.From the table we can find that one's education higher than somebody,their pays will higher too.Professional degree is the best highest degree in the world,their median weekly earnings is the highest,and their unemployment rate is lowest,it's only 2.4%.The second is whoever have doctoral degree's unemployment is 2.5%, the third is master's degree decrease to 3.6%.Finally,who less than high school diploma have the lowest earnings,only 451 dollars,their unemployment rate is 14.1%. So we can find that how important the education in our life,we should study in our life.If we want to have a better life,have a high standared life,high quality life,we should hard work.Through education to improve our skills,earn more experiments.